Stavlov:Out of the frying pan 4/6

posted 26th Sep 2012, 8:55 AM

Stavlov:Out of the frying pan 4/6
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26th Sep 2012, 8:55 AM

Genejoke

my one concern with this part of the story was whether it happens too quickly. Had this been a Jonathon chapter there would have been more focus on what happened in the mind but as it is from Stavlovs POV it felt redundant.

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26th Sep 2012, 10:53 AM

dpat57

Just my unasked-for opinion, but there is the feeling of fast-forward here, as if a few panels involving the arrival of the rest of the amphibians (and Stavlov and Jonathon's reaction to same) got left on the cutting room floor, I'm not sure if it's totally down to Stavlov's limited POV. Your mileage may vary, etc. That's not to say I haven't been enjoying the sequence.

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26th Sep 2012, 11:35 AM

Genejoke

I know exactly what you mean, something is missing, a few more panels would probably have helped a lot.

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